Animation Workshop Feedback - Desislav Georgiev #19a (2023)

[Music] all right univers go back there is no sound we have a live actual plate and your dragon and you got a hold out there yeah goes back okay so you're talking about a dinosaur shot Dragon integrator with live action plate so my first impression a couple things the tricky thing is your color all of this starts to blend in yes I can see the difference here but it it's just I would find I mean the sun's over there maybe you can have a bit of a stronger light to get some Rim light here at the end but I would definitely start changing the colors it gets it a bit it's a bit difficult to see I see it I know what it is but you might as well change the color so it's really visible and Pops and then the other thing is it's very very slow at this point if I go four times faster there's more energy there's more interest to it that's my main concern is that it's so slow cuz with that slowness you're also starting to kill the weight it's such a slow um flap because it's not a half flap where he Glides or it or she where it's kind of a an adjustment I'm going to stay up there this feels like no no no I'm flapping cuz I'm flying but they're so slow and it's there's an overall softness to the membrane and the and the the sides as well and especially here as you go down with this first and there's not that much drag in the tips here it just feels like it's a very soft plane where I'm not quite buying the sense of resistance and strength as he goes down or it this A buy was you know you fold your wings as you go up and you do have a reversal here but again it's very flowy soft and we have one two three four five six seven eight one two I don't know it's not that much in R but there just there's an overall splin and softness where I know you're bound you know to that plate doing this but it could be something where it comes in goes up and then does a bit of like a side turn like think toothless no not that this is super cartoony but something where there's more energy to it and there's more V variation in the path um I don't know if you want to add anything to it where flies away and then there's a chopper you know chasing things and shooting at it and that's why it has to go over there goes over there and then we shoot like against the The Rock side as the the chopper comes in and flies behind it and there's a second one coming I mean there there's a bunch of stuff you could do but that's that's kind of where I'm at um the main thing it's slow and there's a softness to the wing flapping and the overall shapes where I don't I don't sense a strong structure there that makes sense hope that makes sense but that's kind of what I have especially here too as you go up we're so far forward into this and you bend a bit more back so that we are like if that's your dragon they're actually the figure eight but going back to front so this is the head it's back to front and this is borderline getting into like rear up front here and then we're almost swimming where the wings go back that's kind of that's my concern there but also first pass you let me know what you want to do and like how far you want to change this what your thoughts are different plates different dragon all that jazz like how far do you want to push this so uh let me know all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whenever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like And subscribe would be awesome all right thank [Music] you