Nightshade Academy | Midseason Discussion

Mel Torrefranca
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hello and welcome to the Nightshade
Academy intermission I'm Mel toy Franca
the creator of this story it's crazy to
me to think that we're already halfway
through the release of everything
confirmed for the audio adaptation
I feel like I just started working on
this project yesterday before I dive
into the content just a quick
announcement Nightshade Academy will be
published in its original book format on
November 11th of 2023. if you're
interested in reading the book early in
exchange for an online review you can
apply to be an art reader The Arc copies
or Advanced reader copies are not
actually available right now but as soon
as they are ready they will be released
out to people in order of application
date so sign up as soon as possible to
receive the book as soon as possible the
link is in the description below let's
start with the prologue I was actually
nauseous when I first wrote that I was
just writing the first draft and I
realized
she has to kill him
but how she's not gonna have any weapons
on her and then my brain just
immediately went long and I was like the
log Emoji is not the same for me anymore
let's look at some comments that the
prologue received dang that was darker
than I expected I have two things to say
to this first of all yay I'm very
pleased that it had that dark twist
that's what I was going for second of
all are you the chicken because I had a
chicken
beta Reed capsule and give me feedback
and I I think it might be you
are you the chicken if so I'm very
honored that you've stuck around this
long thank you damn Mel's voice has a
different vibe in this I'm a little bit
afraid what is the different vibe it's
my Nightshade Academy voice different
maybe it is
prologue hide and seek yeah yeah okay I
get it today is special for me it's my
birthday thank you Mel for making it
even more so this is the best birthday
gift that I could ever hope for man
that is wild for my work to be the best
birthday gift ever I mean that is of the
utmost honor we got a comment from
Sebastian here who created the short
film for my first novel leaving
wishville this is sick in both ways
can't wait for the book I am very
pleased to know that you think my work
is sick and disgusting thank you very
much I also asked a question that not
many of you answered
I'm very hurt
um
yeah I did get one response so shout out
to Rose Woodstone I asked was Cal a
varium in the right I think she took it
a tad too far I also agree with you
there I think she took it just a pinch
too far just a little bit on the outside
I'm completely silent and still but on
the inside I'm freaking drowning yet
also exploding with excitement welcome
to my daily life it's either excitement
or dread I actually have a fun story
about the prologue I knew that it had to
take place two years before the start of
episode one in order for that to happen
the characters that are playing hide and
seek had to be 13. I was like wait a
minute
do people play hide and seek when
they're 13 so I asked a question on
YouTube at what age are you too old to
play hide and seek 10. I stopped playing
hide and seek when I was like 10 10 or
11 years old disappointing 12 Max 10 to
12 years old somewhere around 12 maybe
normal hide and seek when you're like 12
but then it evolves into hide and seek
around the block got another one 12.
early teens I'm almost 13 and I still
play hide and seek with my younger
siblings I still play with my siblings
and I'm 14. I would say 14 to 15. 13
maybe 15 among peers in my experience
honestly I would still go play with
friends and I'm 17. I'm 20 and I would
still play hide and seek literally if
any of my friends are watching this and
you want to play hide and seek hit me up
I will play hide and seek okay honestly
I don't think there's any age where you
stop the game just gets progressively
harder like maybe you play in the dark
or tag someone oh gosh
or tagging someone means hurting them
or maybe my cousins and I are messed up
um please be safe never too old though
socially I'd assume about 19. even I am
92 I will play it never too old for that
I guess I actually would love to if
someone asked me to play hide and seek
with them especially my friends hey a
Mew with the cat I'm down I'm down let's
do it there really isn't an age where
you're too old to play hide there's no
such thing as being too old to play hide
and you're never too old for hide and
seek you're never too old for hide and
seek never never never ever never LMAO
the enthusiasm in that one never there
are more Extreme Ways to play it like
what it's really sad because I can't
remember the last time I played hide and
seek but I have so many fond memories I
remember one time I hit in a I hid in
the cabinet and I I sat there for like
probably a couple hours super pleased
with myself because I thought they
couldn't find me and eventually when I
came out of the cabinet all of my
friends were just watching SpongeBob and
they say they gave up and they were
bored and so I was just sitting in a
cabinet for no reason so I've got a
question here where did the idea to turn
Nightshade Academy into an audio drama
first come from it popped into my head
on multiple occasions after listening to
the Audio Drama mother hacker what made
me commit to the project full force was
actually the voice actors I put up a
casting call expecting no one to
audition I think I ended up with over
200 or something crazy there were 56
auditions just for Yoshi Kanye alone his
voice and I was like Wow people actually
want to be a part of this Yoshi's voice
actor really captured exactly how I
imagined Yoshi's voice when I was beta
reading I'm very happy to hear this from
a beta reader and actually multiple beta
readers have told me this like I said
there were 56 auditions for some reason
I just kept coming back to Jason's
audition I was like no this is Yoshi
like I don't know why but this is Yoshi
this was super engaging Mel can't wait
for the next episode and to meet Val
finally I'm very honored to hear this
from you I'm I'm obsessed with all of
your analysis and reviews of movies and
books whether it's on YouTube or on
Instagram I'm very much a fan avelle
I've made that very clear however I will
admit some of the other characters have
grown me more throughout the editing
process I very much relate to Pinto I'm
not sure if I'd say he's like my
favorite character or that I even like
him he reminds me too much of me I can
just really relate like the the
obsession with career and the inability
to just have fun this is a comment to
episode 2 selection season gosh I love
this one I kind of knew Yoshi was gonna
get selected and I expected Elora to be
selected too when it added his name just
right at the end oh my God I was excited
here's a meme that someone posted in the
Discord fun fact about Alora she didn't
exist until fairly recently I was
hesitant to introduce too many
characters in Citra when Yoshi's just
gonna leave them anyway but then I
thought it'd be a fun addition and kind
of bring more to the world and make that
town feel more real and I was like I
like Laura she's fun so I added her in
and who knows maybe she'll come back in
the future at this point I'm just hoping
that night shoot Academy becomes a
bestseller and Belladonna gets picked up
to become a movie or a Netflix original
you are my favorite author keep up the
great work this sounds amazing I
wouldn't be surprised if this became a
bestseller and became a movie wow thank
you very much I'm glad you see you see
potential for something larger the
moment that made you fall in love with
this book completely it was my childhood
friend Angie that kind of convinced me
to end up turning this into the trilogy
we were going to the beach I believe and
I just started telling her about the
story the original story and then she
started bouncing ideas off of me and
like what if this happened or what if
this character was there and we just
ended up brainstorming and then I got
lost and it took forever for me to drive
us back home but that was the moment I
realized like I was so lost in this
world I literally drove to the middle of
nowhere his Nightshade Academy set in
the same place as the sky waves with us
or did you change the setting and if so
why Pawn text the sky weaves with us is
the name of the original story I wrote
when I was 10 that I'm basing all of
this on what plot points from the sky
weaves with us actually made it into the
Belladonna Trilogy I had the whole
island Vibe the whole weather being
gloomy that was all the very built into
the original story and that has not
changed at all the atmosphere of the
island is very much the same in terms of
plot points Nightshade Academy is more
of a prequel to the original story that
I wrote to the sky weaves with us had
the character Yoshi in it and he was
always my favorite character when I was
younger and so when I Revisited the
story with the intent of rewriting it I
realized I really want to tell Yoshi's
story first
so book two is more closely aligned with
the skyweaves with us in terms of the
plot and it follows the original main
character which is Santi dang I got
played this is a comment on episode
three blood bound and I actually
remembered the moment I first read this
because I was in a coffee shop and I it
took me a moment to process because I
was like what does that mean and then I
realized it was Alex Bowie the voice
actor for quacks and then it all came
together and I just started laughing in
public it was very awkward yeah I still
don't forgive you for that Alex feels
like we're building to something special
I'm hooked is it something special or is
it something absolutely terrible we'll
have to wait and see
oh man I cry when I think of the ending
just kidding
um
composure the tension and character
conflict in this episode had me on the
edge of my seat Yoshi's internal
conflict in this episode was so gripping
it was an absolutely brilliant episode
as has been the series so far this means
a lot coming from other writers thank
you guys so much I'm glad that the
interior up interior internal conflict
hit hard here's a
here's a meme that that Millie put
together a trade-off for your service as
a guardian you receive trauma also fun
fact about episode 3 that this meme also
reminds me of is the song We Have It All
by pimp stones that was actually the
inspiration for adding this moment in
the story because in previous drafts it
wasn't such a big deal what other books
short stories did you take inspiration
from while writing it I would say
definitely Ender's Game by Orson Scott
Card I can't think of any short stories
some shows that definitely inspired it
would be troll Hunters the animated show
I absolutely love it also the anime
assassination classroom that was one of
my absolute favorites in eighth grade I
love that show so much here are some
comments on episode 4 orientation the
fangirlish urge to be selected for the
Academy just to give Yoshi a hug
Yoshi needs a hug honestly and we
haven't even gotten to his Peak anxiety
yet I know it might be painful later on
in the story to see Yoshi and Clark's
friendship become ruined because of the
academy and it's already looking that
way but I'm kind of a fan of characters
being pitted against each other
especially if they were close friends
before because it creates tension that
I'm just a sucker for it was not my idea
it was a beta reader who pitched it to
me and I was like whoa that would be so
much better than having them just be
complete randos I'm very glad people
seem to be enjoying the uh the falling
out of that friendship LOL The Meta nah
it's the eye patch response Got Me Oh My
Gosh guys uh I was actually not sure
about that line at first but my Beta
readers just absolutely loved it look
there were so many responses to that
comment so I was like I have to keep it
in I can't take it out after that when
Yoshi was thinking how did we get here
the theme song started playing in my
head very intentional the how did we get
here I am a sucker for incorporating
recurring phrases into my books you'll
notice it in capsule if you've read that
I will use any opportunity I can to
incorporate phrases from the episode
titles even if it's not that episode
like rabbit hole it gets mentioned a lot
what could have been the phrase like
could have been oh my gosh I just like
reusing phrases and it's just really fun
Ember is such an interesting character I
always love characters we don't know if
we could trust I don't really know if I
trust her or not she has a point that
Yoshi's emotional state seems to be
crumbling losing his best friend failing
his father and he seems to have a lot of
low self-esteem I hope we can trust
Amber though trust no one Yoshi's casual
she steals bread will forever be funny
to me there's a lot of Yoshi um I guess
jokes or like little comments he makes
that even catch me off guard in episode
nine I believe he makes a joke about uh
a pin being sharp it's not a bad
nickname nicknames are pointless what a
pin is sharp oh my God I can't sometimes
it's just so cringy but I just have to
add it in I can't resist I can't resist
finish your supper I love that line and
uh it becomes a recurring joke
throughout part two now go upstairs
and finish your supper
also check out this amazing fan art of
Professor Ember I'm in love with it the
hair is is sharp and I like that I made
this sketch of my character's like ages
ago oh my goodness this was a year ago
we've got a real Yoshi a real Yoshi in
real life I also made this concept art
for the Belladonna uniforms a while back
whoa the ending was awesome OMG the
ending gave me chills oh these are
comments on uh selection material when
Professor Amber gives Yoshi that intense
lecture so you need to really dig yashi
you need to dig and you need to find a
reason why you bleed to stay here that
was one of my favorite things to write a
Julia the voice actor for for Professor
Ember she did such a great job though to
the rescue here's a response to episode
nine appreciate the gut punch that was a
close one anytime oh these are the voice
actors for Belle and the latest voice
actor for Pinto communicating in
character oh God I had a feeling
something was off when an unexpected
free day came up I feel so bad for Pinto
good thing Belle was there to help him
not get filtered though I was so excited
to see everyone's reactions to to
episode 9 because I feel like it's the
first time things start to go weird any
form of romantic relationship between
Val and Pinto all of the romance that
I've added to any of my previous books
was based on beta reader feedback I'm
literally keeping tallies because I
can't make up my mind on my own I have
no strong personal preference in terms
of what ships sail and as you can see my
um my Beta readers are a very opinion
opinionated a lot of people do ship Bell
and Pinto I've got a lot of Yoshi and
Vel Yoshi and Kia and a ton of like
neutral answers and then people who
absolutely don't want any romance at all
between the trio so yeah it's
complicated who knows is my response to
that how did you come up with the
symptoms of the belladonna plant that
was mostly research that I did on
Belladonna online and then I also
listened to the audiobook The Royal art
of poison on a completely unrelated note
I think I know the five teens who
graduate for the program and I responded
who
and the response was Pinto Val yashi and
quacks that's only four I'm crying that
was so cute this was a nice break mostly
after that last episode great moment
between Yoshi and Vel ah the wholesome
moments between Yoshi and Val love their
interactions with each other yay a whole
samyashi novel episode love this one oh
I love the game at the end the
characters weren't totally miserable in
this episode yay I'm glad everyone
seemed to enjoy episode 10 quite a bit I
had a lot of good responses Yoshi and
Val training together was based on my
personal experience in karate when I was
around the age of 13 to 14 or 15. my
sparring partner his phrase that he told
me all the time was be stupider because
I was so hesitant with every move and I
just had no confidence essentially when
it came to fighting I realized that that
would be a really fun element to
incorporate into Val's character what
were the hardest chapters to write and
which ones were you looking forward to
writing the most to answer both of those
questions now that I've given it some
thought I would say episode 10 was both
the hardest to write and the one I was
looking forward to in theory it seems so
much fun two characters that I
absolutely love and adore put them
together for an entire episode that
centers almost completely around just
them I thought it would be great but I
had a really really hard time writing
that episode it took place in a garden
and then at one point it took place in
the lab and then eventually I got to the
current version but also I knew nothing
about horses and I spent a lot of time
researching like how do you make how do
you make a horse move and then also just
the emotional
progression of their conversations and
stuff was really hard I have written
down a few predictions I've thought
about while listening to the audiobook
my first prediction is about Yoshi my
second prediction is about the five
graduating trainees yes I love to hear
predictions about the final five I have
a feeling the ones that will be
graduating are Yoshi quacks Val pinto
and KO at first I thought Senna was
going to make it as one of the
graduating trainees but now I Know
Anything Can Happen by the end of part
one we will know who the final five are
episode 20 is intense
it is crazy my Beta readers know who the
final five are so please do not spoil it
guys speaking of ko flashback to that
time I almost named him kodo I've had
578 people vote on YouTube on his name
is book two and three plotted I am happy
to say that yes they are plotted book
two is plotted more than book three I
have like a vague outline for book three
but I do know how the story ends
and I don't like it
um book two is much more structured and
I've actually written quite a large
chunk of booktube just a fun final poll
that I hosted recently is it really true
that Heroes live in Stars this was from
the theme song majority of people think
Heroes live in Stars look up at the
stars those are our heroes yeah I think
I'm gonna wrap up this video now but
thank you so much for watching and once
again if you're interested in receiving
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reader I hope this has been entertaining
at least a little bit for you and I will
see you next week with the release of
episode 11 her voice bye
